Wednesday, September 21, 2005

TAGGED !





Was tagged by Shrutz ..... which means a short story in less than 55 words on this post... so, here goes ....


I stood at the edge looking down into the dark liquid below.
Knew I couldn't go back down the way I came up, as the way was too winding and slippery.
And then, I started falling ...
Suddenly , I realised my beautiful butterfly wings could prevent me from falling into the tea cup below.



And, now , to pass the baton on ....
Come on Silverine, Arz000n, KickAssSo, Praveen

19 comments:

Arz000n said...

Am I first in commenting here

Woooo..Hoooo!!

Arz000n said...

way was too winding and slippery.
From this, if I use ma Sherlock Mystery solving cap, I can imagine you sitting on the edge of the cup, which is in turn kept near a table fan....no wonder it was windy around.

I started falling ...
Fan had auto-swing on...
Hmmm...must be Khaitan's new model

beautiful butterfly wings could prevent me from falling into the tea cup below.
You are a beautiful butterfly with wings. And you know how to fly

Amazing story...I'd to literally think hard on it to get the exact meaning. You were promoting either for a black coffee or Table fan with auto-swings...right??


:)
Kidding...
Have a nice day ahead...amazing one.
Thanks for tagging me..I will have to think of a good story now :)

Take care

Jithu said...

hmmm... :-)

Roshan said...

Hey Deepa, I am fine. Been out with a fracture for awhile (don't have a pc at home. I am back, better than ever.
My blog has changed, same url but it is new. The old one has been relegated to just hockey & football. Hope u have been great & I am reading ur blog regularly

>|' ; '| said...

shrutz tagged me too..
:-s
55 words is enuf to express a lot!

Art said...

wow!!! beautiful story...

tcr_79 said...

Well written...

Keshi said...

z000nie me following u everywhere here...think of Mrs.Ted Bundy lol!

**You were promoting either for a black coffee or Table fan with auto-swings.

hahaahaha!




Deepa that was cute!

Keshi.

Arz000n said...

I think you sound like Mrs. Ned Blondy now :)

Jeeez....Z000nie is more scared now.....
woooooooo...


@Deepa
If you think somewhat lost in the conversation, then pls read Confession of a Psycho killer whenever you ge time. Hope you doing good there Deepz. Take care n Greetz!!

Invincible said...

me back (again).
That was a cute piece of creative fiction.
:)

@ z000n - way was winding i thought like spiral/zigzag.
lol.
I too fail to get the exact measure of the story :(

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

HI !

2 Arz000n : Congrats on being the first ;) ....
And elementary, dear Arz000n ..... but you know, i could have been making an add for artificial lifee sized flying wings .. what say ????

2 Jithu : ???

2 Roshan : What happ ? n thanxs 4 being a regular ...

2 Poison : Even silence expresses a lot .. right ???

2 Art : Thank you ... :))

2 tcr_79 : Thank you ...

2 Keshi : Hi !!! Z000nie's follower .. huh ????

2 Invincible : Hi !!! welcome back !!!
n i am as enigmatic as ever !!!

Invincible said...

Oh !
But wud the curtains ever raise?

kickassso said...

55 words GRRRR!
felt like precis writing in 10th all over again!

Keshi said...

lol Deepa yep yep me currently Mrs.Ned Blondy ;-)

Keshi.

Keshav said...

stumbled upon this blog by chance! Nice story!

Art said...

no new posts??????

tcr_79 said...

yeah exactly my question to you... Why no new posts...

Since i have started checking your page out, there have been no posts

silverine said...

Hi Deepa,

Really struggling with your tag :(

Guess I cannot keep it short :))

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