Tuesday, August 16, 2005

Defensive




I watched as people hurt her
Teased her about things that were important to her
Things that others wouldn't understand
Felt her too feeble to defend herself
Watched her cry silent tears of pain

Watched from above
Watched her glow
Glow in the all consuming aura of hurt

Watched her build her own shell
Sensed her deep space
Saw her retreat from all that was unimportant

Slowly saw her turn defensive
Lash out at all those hurting statements
Saw her lose , Saw her win
Saw her give up on all the battle of life

7 comments:

Vivhyd said...

wht r u talking abt in this? my grey cells aren't working.. only understood whtever it was.. its no more.. wazzit??

kickassso said...

so what happens to her in the end?

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

2 vivhyd : itz a st of deep feeling

2 kickassso : still trying to find out

>|' ; '| said...

"Saw her give up on all the battle of life"

the battle ends in death. you cant give up in the middle of life. i found that out last week, at the peak of a depressive streak.

neermathalam said...

deepz..
what will u ask God ?
Peace or disturbance
Disturbance creates masterpieces like this...

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