Monday, June 27, 2011

Closure

It is a full circle

The misery I experienced was

in turn experienced by the one who caused it


But no joy

Just a sense of loss

And a knowledge that this was the last chance


Despite further chances of meeting

Despite having been the best of friends

There will be no further conversation


This is indeed a closure

And a mighty heavy one at that

Never did vengeance taste so foul


It has come to a full circle

the hunter and the prey

both hurt and suffering victims.


P.S : Vague, but that's how it should be !


49 comments:

Kiddy said...

This sounds serious Deepa.I know all about the hunting game,it's not pretty.

Anonymous said...

deepa , thats what life is . Its always comes back what u you had given in past. smile as you always do .

MtaI said...

I pray the pain and hurt is soon a distant memory,

Wish you much peace and happiness, always.

Be well.

Anonymous said...

:( what happen deepa ? Everything will be fine .

Eon Heath said...
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Eon Heath said...

Hey,Hi

i donno why, but i kinda felt this coming...
:)

words of comfort may not soothe you anymore,
the wisdom of the past
may only leave your will sore...
the hunter may become the hunted,
but, aint the prey dead too??

inhale, exhale.
life, feel.

:)

tc da...


p.s.- had a typo in the pervious comment, so deleted it.. :)

Camille said...

deep, honest & insightful!

I enjoyed your poem!

Sorcerer said...

The Bare Necessities
** JUNGLE BOOK **

Look for the bare necessities
The simple bare necessities
Forget about your worries and your strife
I mean the bare necessities
Old Mother Nature's recipes
That brings the bare necessities of life

Wherever I wander, wherever I roam
I couldn't be fonder of my big home
The bees are buzzin' in the tree
To make some honey just for me
When you look under the rocks and plants
And take a glance at the fancy ants
Then maybe try a few

The bare necessities of life will come to you
They'll come to you!

Look for the bare necessities
The simple bare necessities
Forget about your worries and your strife
I mean the bare necessities
That's why a bear can rest at ease
With just the bare necessities of life

Now when you pick a pawpaw
Or a prickly pear
And you prick a raw paw
Next time beware
Don't pick the prickly pear by the paw
When you pick a pear
Try to use the claw
But you don't need to use the claw
When you pick a pear of the big pawpaw
Have I given you a clue ?

The bare necessities of life will come to you
They'll come to you!

So just try and relax, yeah cool it
Fall apart in my backyard
'Cause let me tell you something little britches
If you act like that bee acts, uh uh
You're working too hard

And don't spend your time lookin' around
For something you want that can't be found
When you find out you can live without it
And go along not thinkin' about it
I'll tell you something true

The bare necessities of life will come to you
________

Yo deeps..

When life gives ya lemon...bring out the Vodka!!

Rrrrrrrright...go sit and sulk in the corner!!

Eon Heath said...

@Sorcy
:)
for that ^ sau khoon maaf....

Sorcerer said...

@Eon
nnu chal enda?

Eon Heath said...

@Sorcy
:P
sau - 100
khoon - kolapathakam
maaf - kshamikkam

MTaI said...

Hola, guys!!!!!

Where is everybody?!

Sorcerer said...

@MTI
This is Sorcerer..checking on your frequency..
I r here

MTaI said...

@Sorcs
How u doin, kiddo! ;)

Sorcerer said...

@MTI
aha! me is fine bebe.
how you doing mti?
whats up these days?
Deeps is occupied with bringing down FUBAR levels...that I know.

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

@ Kiddy - I know ... but, it's not really animals I'm tlaking about !

@ MtaI - hola mademoiselle .... thank you :)

@ Eon - Thank you boss .. thanks for everything ... aah .. were u trying to read my mind ?

@ Camille - Thank you .. I get comfort reading yours too !

@ Sorcy - :( :( .. that was so damn damn nice f ya ... i hav never tried vodka :|

MTaI said...

@Sorcs
FUBAR...what be that?

Hey, when do we get to read the great Sorcs Production.....Mutiny in the Nunnery Part 1? :D

Sorcerer said...

@MTAI

Aha!!
Repeat after me...
I will Google Before Asking stupid questions...

Mutiny in Nunnery -Part 1.
Yes..yes..I will write it..will be a surprise..just for horror..you see.

@Deeps
aha!! really?Ahhungari

MTaI said...

@Sorcs
See.... I thought since i had a walking encyclopedia at hand, I would do away with the effort of typing!


BIG MISTAKE!!!

:P

Sorcerer said...

@Mti
aha...yeah..i know..Eon..right?

Kiddy said...

I was not talking about animals neither,but women hunters.When actually God made men to be hunters and to find women.But now women have taken over this role and love it so much,they have totally gone hog wild as they really get into the game with furor,but the truth is that they are vicious and extremely competitive with other females.The roles need to be reversed.

MTaI said...

@ Sorcs
Now HE would have been my first choice but since he ain't around I thought I'd make do with the abridged version (read, Sorcsunni) :D....not quite the real deal but......

I was SOOOOOOO wrong!!!! :D

Sorcerer said...

@Mti
you need "encyclopedia for dummies"..which is Eon.

MTaI said...

Awwwwwwww!

Sorcy-baby felt bad!!!!

There, there Chico! Was only kidding!!! ;) All better now?





Er.....that the best you could come up with?....Just askin', no offence!

Sorcerer said...

@Mti
yeah...thats the best
ya know..gotta keep the standards low so ya know...you can understand..

*whistles

MTaI said...

@Sorcs
Ah! Chico! Such rage!!!! Lololol!!!
Ok! Ok! Don't twist yourself into a pretzel!

Sorcerer said...

@Mti
ha.ha.ha
me..in rage?
*sigh.
Nope.

where are the usual suspects?

MTaI said...

@Sorcs

Both MIA....wonder what's up? Hope all well.

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

ahha .. Sorcy missing us .. huh ?
seriously, what happ in TVM ? u hav becoem so senti ???

Sorcerer said...

@Deeps
nothing happened in TVM
nannavanum sammathikkilla.

ahhungarikal.

sentio?
ayyada..

@Mti
hey..everyone is here it seems..except EON.
Deeps is enjoying her BHD ..it seems

up↑take said...

ouch.. whatever gives pleasure today gives pain tomorrow... it is a zero sum game... let's not blame others or the circumstances, but just accept that pleasure-pain come wrapped in the same box, this dual nature of pleasure-pain-cycle

---

Weekly Horoscope for Scorpio

You have deep feelings. Emotions may cloud your thoughts on Tuesday. Strive to think clearly. Be careful of your actions when Mars is quincunx your ruler Pluto on Wednesday. Don't wander in unfamiliar areas. Look both ways before crossing busy streets. Let safety be your guide.

Try to get enough sleep. Everything else will take care of itself
(... I added the last two sentences :D )

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

@ Sorcy, Compassion from you is a rare thing .. And enjoy it I will .. BHD (bad hair day ?) or no BHD !!
Oye ... did someone chase you up a tree in TVM ???
Aah no .. i guess. .. i guess .. ya , i got it ... 3 days of missing us has gone to your head, alleyo ?

@ Uptake : Thanks boss ... At times, I wonder if I really am a scorpio !! Why don't I lash out ???!! And safe I need to be ... need to quit playing with fire !

Sorcerer said...

@deepa
i miss the awesome sea food at TVM.Yes..missed you buggy bugs for sure.
remember,,,you were pushed off the tree..while we voluntarily came down.
soooo...
dont insult us humans.




@MTI,Eon
wheres you ppl?

Anonymous said...

@ up|take deepa birth date is 9 oct 1981

MTaI said...

@Sorcs
These acronyms are gonna drive me bats! arghhhhhhh!!!!

Was at work Sorcsunni...you know that terrible but necessary evil! ;)

@Dee
Thanks for decoding the acronym! :)

@Eon
Where you be? C'mon!!!

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

@ Sorcy ... i am not a bug ... i see TVM has mellowed you down a lot .. the place does it to people at times....

@ Anony ... I think you are confusing me for someone else !!

@ MtaI .. hola girl ! Exactly, where is Eon ??

Sorcerer said...

@MTI
work?
awwwww...soo bad bad..
*sigh

final call: be nice to me and I let Deeps [Angel with Candle] walk in front of your room at nunnery without doing much harm to you in the script

else
{

I_warned_you_so();

}

@Deeps
mellowed down?
Nope...Your brainwashing technique is not gonna work on me..
:O
you are trying to burn it into my brain..

TVM is a nice place..with lots of eateries with sea food.

@EON
eon nu script il oru awesome role kodukkanam.

ahhungarikale.

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

Sorc,
thaaram ethiallo !!!
athe .. i dont harm MtaI and all ... you are my target ... in fact all 3 of our target !!

aah .. you are already mellowed down .. ask MtaI if u dont believe me .... ! something happ 2 u in TVM !!!!

Sorcerer said...

@Deeps
Ndakkilla..Deepooseee..nadakkillaa..
aaa teknik wont work

Ps:Was going through my old posts..
*teary eyed.
Gwad..I managed to survive with all those awesomness.wow!
I am soo Genesis.

Quote for the night:

"God was doodling when he made octopus"- Sorcerer on Octopus Paul [R.I.P]

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

ahha !! u r blushing !!!
wow .. a blushing Sorcy :D :D :D

MTaI said...

@Sorcs
Threats! Threats! Threats!
Chico, when will u learn I don't respond to threats!
You go ahead....lookin forward to reading ur script!

Kiddy said...

What about when God made a man that was an Octopus for one woman or a woman an Octopus for one man?

Anonymous said...

@Kiddy
Don't quite follow that....please explain. Ta much.

Kiddy said...
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Kiddy said...

I mean Anon a person that is obsessed with one guy or gal and want to constantly grab them.

Sorcerer said...

@MTi
aha! okay...learn it the hard way.
there is a saying in malayalam

Ariyatha Deepoos choriyumbol ariyum.

Deeps would be happy to translate it for you.

@Deep
translate the above said things...in its correct way..

you always...confuse and take advantage of pavam MIT's ignorance and language handicap.

Kiddy said...

Sorcy that reminds me of Detrek's mom in To the Manor Born.

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

aah @ MtaI ... You would not want to know ... You see Sorc is laying a trap for me here .... no matter how I try to translate that, he's gonna laugh his wicked head out :( damn ! damn ! damn ...

* Deepa shakes her head *

Why not let the master do the translation ?

@ Kiddy .. who is that ??!!

Sorcerer said...

@Deepa
Khi khi khi khi khi
*wicked smile

@MTI
see what i told ya..
Scheming deeps hidden Eon