Those Dreaded Days !
It took a full minute for the realisation to sink in. She had never grasped what had really happened to give her so much pain. And in her time of pain, there was no one to pacify her.
She cried her heart out.
And then looking down, she realised repellent was the only way. The dreaded mosquitoes were back with the first monsoon rains. Rubbing it all over herself, she went back to sleep.
--- My entry for 3 word Wednesday
32 comments:
:) :) :) Nice!
Mosquitoes are something universally dreaded!
Liked how it began so scarily!
Titaxy :
:) Thank you
Pia :
:D :D ... My initial post had just 3 lines : one line for each word .. then modified it to make more sense
This is really nice and funny. Were you required to write a story using those three highlighted words?
Yes, the universal dread. I hate mosquitoes.
LOL... very nice deepa :) :)
UGH! Hate those things!
Okay, you've got me scratching! Well done.
My 3WW: Bump In The Night
I hate mosquitoes! Good post!
Clever! They have arrived here too.
Mosquitoes in New Hampshire as well as black flies. ;(
-Tim
Mine is here: http://timremp.blogspot.com/
Them mosquitoes! here too!
Ajay :
Yup ... each week, 3 words. If interested , check the 3 Word Wednesday link on my post. Just above the grey snap (in green) http://www.threewordwednesday.com/
ThomG :
I know !
I never thought whether I like them or not .. just acknowledged their presence
Kanagu :
:)
Thanks ma
Angel :
I know !
Grandma :
Hey !
Thank you.
Let me have a read
Denise :
Hey !
Thank you :)
Tammy :
Hey !
here ? Where ?
Timothy :
Hey !
Black flies ? As in house flies ?
Yup ... am gonna read your entry now
Vivek :
Here they are :P !
Interesting! :)
Very nice.loved it.
ooh! nice! :)
Your entry made me itch, on the nape of the neck where those little mosquitos alwys seem to get me. What a perfect topic choice for being given the word "dread"!
Phew, they say cigarette smoke works too, but if you're going to sleep you really need a mosquito net!
Bite!
hate hate hate mosquitoes!! Love the writing :)
LOL ... gud one :P
:
Chandrika :
Hello !
Thanks !
Niveditha :
hey thanks !
Jay :
Hello !
Thanks for the compliment !
I love these 3WW
Andy :
Hey !
Never knew about cigarette smoke being effective .... I know best protection is a mosquito net.
Dee Martin :
hey !
Thank you :)
Swaram :
heh ! thanks !
Starry :
Thank you !
LOL! u must be really bugged :)
ha ha ha..very nice!
haha..nice
Did this story take place in a "Home In Kochin, kerala?"
:) Nice writing style. The first sentence had me thinking of a horror story.
ohh but if mosquitos were my problem to contend with in this life! Cheers!
deepa you have been tagged.
2 Songofsea :
hello
heh heh .. not really !
2 Deeps :
Hey !
Thanks !
2 Sorcerer :
It could be anywhere .. Kochi, TVM, BLR, Montreal, Kuwait, US, Himalayas .. Alps ... anywhere where the 2 winged tiny ones fly !
2 Iniyaal :
Thank you :)
2 Stu :
Hey !
Mosquitoes are tiny problems in life right ? (except when you catch malaria/dengue .. etc)
2 Starry :
Yup ... next post is the tag !
nice nice... mosquitoes there also?
is it safe to use those repellent stuff on our skin?
Sujit ,
Heh heh ... howdu !
Rakesh ,
Odomos ?
Post a Comment