Bleeding noses !!
Have you heard of noses that bleed on their own accord for no reason whatsoever ?
Well , they do ... Let me illustrate.
I was sitting in front of my PC .
There was this girl chatting animatedly. She was waving her hands and smiling at the screen.
It was very interesting to watch her . A variety of emotions flitted across her face. All of a sudden, there was an emotion not seen till now. It was an expression of shock ! She looked down at her fingers and there was blood on them. She touched the side of her nose and realised that there was blood there.
I guess she mentioned it to whoever she was chatting with , and that person asked her to go and wash. But , she refused ... (this was obvious from the way she shook her head) and some words seemed to ensue.
A couple of minutes later , I guess the bleeding got worse. This time , the person she was chatting with probably emotionally blackmailed her , because she got up and walked to the door.
As I walked to the bathroom to wash my nose , I wondered if the person I was chatting with would be online when I returned.
P.S :
I guess it was just a pimple that broke !
This is a true imaginary story !
85 comments:
interesting to observe the change from "the girl" to "I" / "me".
You sure it was just a pimple ??
sometimes noses do bleed all of a sudden when mind is subjected to abnormal levels of stress etc etc.
Nose bleeding, without any reason???
Hmm.. intriguing!
Suffice to say "all girls bleed" :p
2 Utkarsh :
remember this is a true imaginary story ? heh heh heh !!!
2 Vaibhav :
heee heee heee ... caught ur attention , didnt i ??
errr ... did i get what u meant right ? if i did ... well , do we need to discuss anatomy ? no , not all girls bleed .. age and hormones make a difference :P
Pretty intense chat....what an emotional pimple outburst!
Highly imaginative and true story!
I guess it was just a pimple that broke !
That was so welcome and relieving!!!!
The transformation from she to I was interesting!
2 seriously_frivolous :
hey !
welcome :)
heh heh .. yes indeed !
2 Sreejith :
:)
thank you
Interesting indeed Deepa.. with a great twist..
Yeah noses can bleed, not just if a pimple broke.. Haven`t you heard that when you go in a plane, sometimes people start bleeding from their noses, due to the pressure..
Hope you are doing fine and well.
With Best Regards,
Srijith Unni.
now i m confused.
First, if it's imaginary story then why bleeding nose !! i mean i'vent read any fiction which details tales-of-a-bleeding-nose.
And then, suddenly from her to me transition.
I think u r half imagining and half dreaming :)
So how are you ? Read @ the accident. Minor?
2 Srijith Unni :
i am very fine , thank you !
thank you :)
2 Vinci :
hey !
welcome back :)
imaginary .. as in .. it was in my head !
accident .. well , minor it was .. but a slight mishap , it could have been major :|
oh...so technically/literally/imaginatively who all have web-cams??
The girl at the other end or the girl at our end?? :-?
Btw is this fictious/imaginarily true own-story syndrome contagious!!!
~Cheers
A true imaginary story? That's confusing...
Please see this... and tell us the nosebleed was not of this kind.
Girl you need Vitamin C plenty of it, I had a similar problem when I was a kid. Take care and thank you for your wonderful comments :)
You too started moving to and fro ie..Real to imaginary
She to I
nose to cheeks(pimples..)
And above all was it a cryptographic post..I wonder!.
Now a days my understanding levels has gone for a royal walk.And i find it really tough to understand Tom and Jerry so do this post.
LoL...well put..knew it was you!
he was sitting in front of the pc.
he was trying to understand, why he couldnt understand what the writer wants him to understand.
Finally, I decided to give up.(Did you notice the transition from to 'He' to 'I' ?)
A "true imaginery" story. I had to read it twice to figure the she/I change.
Wow so were u chatting on the same place behind each other :)) that ended in a fight :)
hmm interesting.. nice imaginatory story.. but why blood..?.. the word itself creates some sort of sickness and some sort anxiety..alwa?.. mathe eega hegidira?
sometimes it happens do to excess temp in body!
Attila died of a nosebleed apparently..... :0
Psst... aren't you scared a bit NOW, Deepa? NJAHAHAHAHA
PS: Remember SRK's twiching, quivering lip + hamming + nosebleed in Ashoka?
"Ka...Ka...Ka... Kaurvakiii"
Eeeeewwww!
Deepa, I'm really confused. LOL.
I have had the odd nosebleed where the cause was unknown. Thankfully I haven't had that happen for years.
it's always kind of scary. Seeing blood. Not knowing why you're bleeding. Wondering when it will stop.
uh!! :(
I thought she died in the bathroom..and a hero comes in a resuscitates her!!.
I want a bollywood ishtyle climax!! ;)
oh noooooo!
i get d/c so many times on comment page today.
it looks scary but called as 'boys nature, no worries.' in japan.
some girls have same prob.
please take care!!!!
thats sad how the person was treating her .. how come u never offered to help?
hmmm... that was very "pimply" story...
As I walked to the bathroom to wash my nose , I wondered if the person I was chatting with would be online when I returned.
I??
=ammu=
entheammo!
what happened! who happened? how happened! :P
I didn't know you chat also. Can I have your chat ID please :P
hee hee >:)
hmm hey I've just about got the seed for a story type of narration myself today, so it's an interesting coincidence. I hope I'll write it out sometime soon..
actually I did type out something already.
An imaginary story tht may become true later.. is it?
Hey how are you???:-)
Actually I've been out of blogworld for quite some time now...I'm sorry if I haven't been visiting your blog..
I'm majorly confused lol..:-) However, all I can make out is that the person chatting with the girl was mistreating her!!!
Quote from Chief Wiggum from the Simpsons to his son Ralphy "Son,the reason you're nose is bleeding coz you pick it too little..or probably too much"..yea doesnt make sense but your post made me think of this.
My nose sometimes bleeds in Winter due to extreme cold weather.
TC Deepz!
Keshi.
2 Arun :
webcam ???
sure as hell it is .. i loved the line in ur post
2 Fleiger :
heee heee heee ... no its neither type .. i liked the 2nd one esp
2 silverine :
hey !
Vit C huh ? well, what do u do abt a pimple then ????
2 neermathalam :
why ? what has happ to ur brain ?
2 alex :
congrats !
that was good then !
2 Arm Pitt :
hah ! copy cat !
2 vaik :
:P
u were puzzled ?
2 Sujit :
well , just like that .. thot of it and it came naturally.
am fine .. ennu probs illa
2 White Forest :
hey !
okie ... but this was diff , i guess
2 perplexed kid :
hey doc !
watcha doing watching me ?
Thought it was gonna be a horror story in the beginning....
hmmmm...true imaginary story....feel pity for the person on the other side of the screen.....hope he did not have a major shock.....
sometimes it happens due to change in body temp... me had exp....
hope you doin fine now...
tc!
Cheers!
:)
2 Anand :
Me no Attila ... so, me is safe from nose bleeds :P
yewwww @ Asoka comparison
2 A/B :
Confused ??? Why ?
2 MAthew :
come on ! U have enough bollywood stories there w/out me adding to it
2 Niki :
am fine dear ... abs no prob w/ me
2 Nabeel :
the emotional blackmail bit ? maybe she was happy with the concern behind the emotional blackmail
2 hotice :
:)
2 Amutha :
yeah !
"I"
2 Zonko :
whatz with the who-what-how ???
ha ! urs is also a "true imaginary" story .. huh ?
2 Anon :
hmmm ... that is not the sequence actually
2 Sudarshan :
welcome back
i am perfectly fine
mistreating ?? why ?
Am i working so much since last week tht i got confused while reading the story?
I.. she.. I .. was the gal u?
Noses do bleed.. esp in extreme weather conditions.. i had to take care of mine a lot in summers.. smell an onion to stop the bleeding
Did the treatment in the first link work? And about the second link, if you like it... does that bode ill for me for next time? :o
really hot blooded chat
yeah, sometimes chatting can be intense. so strange that one can get such intense on chats, but not when having a face-to-face talk.
time smone invented the truly mobile chat pc/machine. :))
what hmmm?
CRAZY, I wonda why she did'nt wanna wipe it off...? lol well seems crazy but i guess things happen like this when u crazy mood or wateva =P
take care gurl !
he was sitting in front of the pc.
he was trying to understand, why he couldnt understand what the writer wants him to understand.
Finally, I decided to give up.(Did you notice the transition from to 'He' to 'I' ?)
Armpitt: LOL!!! I tried very had to not put your words here ,but I lost..
Deepa: You can write (copycat)*2 or (copycat +i copycat).. (i for imaginary)
good.. :).. tumba santosha :)
ohh so tears of happiness? hmmm
:-) thanks u
But which line??
Deepa i hope Ekta kapoor reads this...I'm sure she'll pick you up for her upccoming thing for her "K-series" :) lol
2 $1L>erB@Ck :
okie
2 Keshi :
:)
u too !
2 Anoop :
:D
i bet the person on the other end was just surprised at the change of topic !
2 Vishnu :
oh ! is it ?
2 Sudeep :
heeee heeee
i love confusing you
smelling onions instead of smelling salts ?
2 Fleiger :
:P
Arrey , i am perfectly fine !
2 Jeseem :
but u know , sometimes too much of chatting makes u lose the enthu to chat ! etc
2 Arm Pitt :
:)
2 Quz Boss :
just a story .. thatz all ! :)
2 Vinci :
sure ... u too !
2 Sudhakar :
hah !
2 Sujit :
:)
2 Nabeel :
tears ?
2 Arun :
the truly imaginary story line !
2 Mayur :
hey !
welcome
yewww ~~ Ekta k .. no way !
Do you watch Frasier? In that show Niles automatically bleeds from nose whenever he lies. There are some very funny moments on that :)
Spontaneous nose bleeds are actually a symptom of high blood pressure.
Twisted "playing doctor" DNA
oh man, i was waiting for something dramatic.
pimple !
cmon.
yep me too, I sometimes have a bloody nose :)
ok now when r we gonna see u Deepz? :(
Keshi.
aa mahashaya... shockgalu mele shockgalu todta idane!.. evaTu avaNnu bisakTivi.. ellara Tale KetoiTu..
NOOOOOO, it was a poem i read and dun kno who wrote it cuz he/she didnt leave the name =0
Anyhow... DEffy not by me! But i thought dat poem was straight n deep.
MuCh LuV <3
Oic :-)
~Cheers
2 Twisted DNA :
no ! i dont watch Fraser.
And the bleeding nose reminds me of the song : " jooth bole , kauva kaate " ... only thing here , instead of bleeding nose , it is a crow !
2 Raghav :
Expected the unexpected ! :P
2 Keshi :
errrrr ... am not really sure when :P
2 Sujit :
waleedhu .. hange baadubeku !
2 Quz boss :
but somethings dont seem to ring true
2 Arun :
:P
thnx for inserting the word confusion or a/b would have jumped again.. lol
but still i didnt get the story..
lol..nicely written..
was just passing by
Wow, very interesting to read this...great post, first time here on your blog and I will definitely come back for more
Nothing much...
Not able to blog from work and dont have access at home...
Yeah the name (rather short form) is Krish...
hahahahaha, i guess ya didnt get the poem... The girl in da mirror is the author of the poem! Iz alsoa the person dat she says is soooo horrible. Read it ova n you'll get it???? lol MuCh LuV <3
ok.
Keshi.
true imaginary story - ha ah aha ha
Update time, I think!
Deepa, we need an update!
Hi:)
Kabhi kabhi kalpana vastav se bhi jyada sach hota hain, kabhi kabhi..
Roy
was it u on d pc?
Good... so you will be updating the blog soon. And you are tagged, remember?
you do good comedy
Good imagination...:-)
My gf also blogs, she once participated in some story competion where the total no. of words had to be 55, nothing more...nothing less.
You can read them, lemme know what u think:
He looked at her standing behind the counter. She had curly blonde hair and deep blue eyes. It was such a rare combination, as if her face had been painted by a famous painter to perfection. He had never seen such a beauty in his lifetime. Then she moved away in her wheelchair. Life is a bitch....
another one...
Jackson, the renowned sky diver was making an attempt to dive from the highest peak in Europe, in the memory of his late wife.."Here i come sweetheart" he whispered and closed his eyes. Soon in the air, free falling from the sky like a rocket, a beautiful sight, but this time without a parachute.
Cheers!!!!
Bansal
inna bleeding aa?.. athava tumba busy naa?
Even my nose used 2 bleed durin childhood..dunno how it started but it stopped all of a sudden...so din bother abt it...
:)dum dum dum
2 Sudeep :
heh heh heh :P
hmmmmmm
2 ~Lord Anshul :
hey ! Welcome :)
thank you
2 Delaleuverses :
Thank you
and u r always welcome here :)
2 tcr_79 :
oh ! u r back in india .. right ?
2 Quz Boss :
got it dear :)
i replied to the comment on ur blog :)
2 Keshi :
:)
2 known stranger :
what was so funny ?
commedy huh ? thank you :)
2 Vaibhav :
hmmmm ... ok
2 A/B :
okie .. in a couple of days ! ;)
2 Roy :
hi !
:)
yes
2 Sushant :
whatdya think ?
2 Fleiger :
yeah .. had almost forgotten abt the tag thingie .. will do
2 Bobby :
i had done the 5 5word tag too.
The stories are good and written really well ... but the second one was predictable .. the moment u see the " late wife " , u have an idea what is to come
2 Sujit :
busy + travelling
2 Vivek :
and , it no longer does ?
2 neermathalam :
dum dum deeka deeka
2 known stranger :
what yes ?
Good... updates are awaited.
And thankfully, you don't have "Blogger account needed for commenting" enabled on your blog.
YES, mad sad! And true, da parents werent even drunk.
MuCh LuV <3
wow.. elli elli hogidira?..
WB!
keshi.
yes
2 Fleiger :
yeah !
realised that was pretty bad .. having the blogger accnt thing enabled
2 quz boss :
yeah !
tc
2 Sujit :
manege hoogidhe !
2 Keshi :
thanx dear !
2 known stranger :
:)
hai deepa,
Rainy days is the symbol of mans life.because some times its hard and soft.
good post.Nice pic toooo.
bye
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