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Was on a hibernation spell for the past 5 days. When I got back, I happened to read Jagx’s satiric blog on sacrifices from which developed this story:
They came, they saw and they met. And as a twist, they loved too ….. they were the perfect foil to each other ….. but the society and everyone around had other ideas …. Everyone agreed their backgrounds were improperly matched and there were class differences.
Tearfully, they went on their own ways.
The woman had a couple of children and double the number of grandchildren, a great caring and loving husband and a peaceful life.
Finally, she was on her deathbed. And just before she died, she uttered two words “ If only … “ Her doctor covered her dead body and removed the meagre pieces of jewellery to pass it on to her family.
And by chance, he opened her locket ….. to find his dad’s snap inside.
24 comments:
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me first :)
the title of the post '*' spouted this '#' out of me, for which i demand no-blame-attached.
coming back to your post,
'if only' : goes like the script suitable for a bollywood flick :)
The Q to be asked is, what would the doctor do?
A. Will he pester his father now with "y u ditched my mom all her life when u loved someone else. She died craving for ur love, which u cud never give her.
I died the 25 years of my life for a glint of luv in ur eyes. And this lady for whome i spent days n nights studying her, examining her, diagnosing her, caring her like my own mom, trying to rescue her from the mouths of hell, in her dying moments utters the last words for you !!
You have to answer for the tears she cried, for the affection i starved of, for the faith you breached .. .. .. "
The further part cud come as 'if only reloaded' ..
I only have to say - never say "If only" - the past is the past, the future will be brighter...
Personal experience :)
2 Invinci : Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaan u'd give subhash ghai melodrama script writers a run for their money !!!!!
but u know this ' if only .. ' always ruins our peace of mind ???
2 tcr_79 : right u are !!!!
The further part cud come as 'if only reloaded' ..
Yes...and finally it will be 'If only Revolutions :)
wow simply shocking and sad...
Keshi.
Hi Deepa,
Great story. Looks like you are in the short story mode still!! :))
Finally I have taken the tag. Here it is:
She looked at the carnage in disbelief. So many lives snuffed in seconds. Young, old, middle aged, they lay everywhere in heaps, some with life still flickering in them. In a swift act of mercy she shot them to their final rest. This new Bayer Cockroach Spray was indeed good as promised by the salesman.
No, I am not from CET (wots that?) and I dont know Nagu, perhaps he must must know common friends. I am deleting my last comment here as I blog anonymously, also your question from my blog. I am sure you will understand as ur email ID is not shown here ;)Do mail me for any other query hehe :))
true .. 'if only's only make it worse :)
@ invincible..
naahhh dude..you aint seen amny mallu serials lately...recently they've been of "very high standard" and this story qualifies for only about a few dozen episodes of a serial as well as contributing to half the plot:P
2 arz000n :
" If Only .. " reloaded after an year .. when son has kids and so on ....
2 Keshi : :)))) i know !!!
2 Silverine : replies on ur blog
2 vinci : agree yet again !!!
2 kickassso : hey thou art back !!!
if this brief story can be stretched into some 500 pages, it will sell well :-)
hehe yeah!
but for how long...tis not known:(
Nice story, bit filmy though!
HEy, nice blog....keep postin....and drop by mine sometime...
very interesting.. keep it up..
hmm... it was an interesting piece..
2 Jithu : Hello !!!! thank you ...
2 Utkarsh Khare , Sujit : Thanks a lot for stopping by .. and welcome !!!!
And Utkarsh .. well , i feel a lotta things r changing now .. dont u ??
2 Adarsh : i know .. filmy .. yeah !!!
2 The Monk : Heyyy !!!
he he he.. that was lovely piece...
poor romeo
happy blogging..
hope the story doesnt happen in real life ;)
hey how the hell are u doing!
hey nice piece.... may b this is wat that happens in our society...4get ur happiness 2 let others happy....live with fake masks of happiness...but that if only remains wether one says it or not
You have been silent for a while. What was stopping u? Got tangled up in a sari? LOL
No wonder ladies are so attached to their lockets these days .. so this is what they hide inside .. :)
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