void - empty spaces
i spend days and nights obeying the orders no thought , no ideas my mind is like a closed spaceno feeling but an automation.
what i see, what i feel
are all cut off by the unreal
The mind works with no inspiration
What little there was is all lost to subjugation
Places, people , events all fly byAnd to each , to hold on, i tryBut time swings by like a pendulumAnd feels like i have lost the fulcrum
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1 comment:
looks like i've become a regular reader of ur blogs;)...nice work with the poem...the rhymes r also done well except the third and fourth line...but i really liked the meaning...very nice!!
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