Monday, July 04, 2011

If I could choose a dream

If I could choose a dream
What would it be?
It would not be money or power
Nor would it be a dream of the future



It would not be the dream of a crazy fan
Nor would I dream of an ideal world plan.
It would not be a dream on lost aspirations
Nor a dream on future hopes and ambitions


I would dream of something so vivid, so forceful
A dream made of a terribly heavy downpour
Of walking through the rains drenched to the skin
Thunder in the background, everything brightened up by lightning


The horizon, a hue of pink, blue and violet
Streaks of silver enhancing nature's canvas
And taking in this beauty, I'd keep walking
Till I cross the point of no returning

26 comments:

Kiddy said...

That's a beautiful poem and I this a start of a friendship like Rick said to Louis in the end.It also depicts the John Belt's Rain song that's my favorite worship song and a million dollar seller.

Sorcerer said...

Nice .nice poem.
yeah you are right...life aint nothing without the roller coaster rides.
trust me it's an awesome expeirience.

What Doesn't Kill You, Make You Stronger

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

@ Kiddy - :)

@ Sorcy - thank you ... like i say, a word of praise from you is a compliment !
Eh ? u 2 Brutus ? U speaking philosophy ???

kanagu said...

hey... beautifully return... the thought is lovely... :) :)

kanagu said...

sorry I mentioned.. beautifully written :)

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

@ Kanagu .. thank you boss !
what did you mean by "i am scared" on the prev prev post ?

Eon Heath said...

Da, finally...i was waiting for you to write....long time i guess...or atleast since i know...
:)

beautiful...the thought behind those verses..but honestly, i feel theres some resignation to it...
:)
may be jus my idle mind...


Regards,
Eon...

Sorcerer said...

@Deepa
Philosophy is nothing but truth..told in poetic words
Good guess.yes..I ran into a wall.

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

Sorcy ..
aah .. i guessed ... if u need help getting up from the wall, let us know !!
We are ready to help, aren't we ,mtai,eon ?

Eon Heath said...

i wud be glad to help sorcy up on the camel...ohh, sorry up from the fall...

:D

Kiddy said...

That's what John Belt did to me help me get up hehehe.

Kiddy said...

While he sung the Billy Swan sung to me "Let me help".

kanagu said...

that drawing.. with big eyes and red colour all around.. I found it a lil scary... :)

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

Kanagu, thats just 2 birds sitting on a tree ... nothing to be scared about !

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Sorcerer said...

@deeps
no thank you tickler.We are advanced code writers we can stand on our own.

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

ha !
we are just way more efficient and faster .. none of that waiting for an age to compile .. !!!

Sorcerer said...

@Deeps
Compile is too much of a technical term..for ticklers..dont you think?

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

Oye ... without tcl, the compiled C++ would have no use ..

for now , tcl rules !

Sorcerer said...

@deeps
Alright..lets go bash MTI

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

aah Sorcy .... u wanna bash up my pal .. no no no ... dont do .. dont do ..

kanagu said...

ah... Now I see.. :) Earlier I thought those 2 eyes were eyes of a man and that flower as mouth... it has given a scary image...

gee... What eyes or glasses I have got... grrr...

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

aarggjj .. maybe it is just my painting ... hmmm ..

shows just how much more professional i need to get !

Just Words said...

Beautiful poem , I have to admit this “Boss” is blessed with many talents ..Painting, Poetry writing and who can forget the In-depth knowledge of profanity :-)) … how is ur work treating u ?

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

Just Words ,

Hey !!!
Work is all time low .. no inspiration what so ever !!

Thanks for your compliments

Camille said...

wow! this is beautiful, Deepa! It's interesting that you're writing about dreams, because that is what I'm trying to figure out right now- what is my dream and what road do I take to achieve it? Thanks for sharing! :)